My school system uses a website called WritingRoadMap2 to give students practice for the state’s writing assessment test. I was using it with my middle schoolers, and I was amazed at its ability to instantly score their essays in accordance with state writing standards.
I became curious as to what would happen if I fed it madness.
Prompt
Think of a local issue that is important to you. For example, how do you feel about school dress codes? Write in which you state your opinion on your chosen issue and convince people to take a similar stance. Your writing should be convincing.
Response
Theater Wings Are Arbitrary
Theater wings needlessly hesitate toward northern cities. Twilight makes senators thirst; however, they are unable to quench the desire for theater bloodlines. Trickling downwards, these filibusters grow angry. Senators combat this with vice and parasites, but these are inadequate prevention. Parasites worsen the scaffolding, weakening the marrow from the inside spiral. Twice now they have batted eyes at passing motor carriage underlings. Furthermore, I believe all theater wings to be not only arbitrary but also superfluous.
Initially, theater wings in northern cities take up valuable mission resources. These resources could be better expended sideways or behind the temple. Wasted temple space is sinful, and larger metropolitan areas don’t have temple resources to spare. Birds gather where theater wings are brooked and this brooking engenders fear. Mask traders garner fear since terror is common currency for their ilk. The hesitation of theater wings plays directly in their plans. Don’t support terror. Don’t support mask traders. Murder freely all false witnesses to persecution’s memory. The trading of mask belittles theaters. Wings hog resources.
On second thought, senators riddled with self-inflicted parasites cannot tumble shine the bone lesions. Bone lesions are a precursor to theater wings and are equally arbitrary. Writ large in the pages of history, bone lesions not tumble shined are an eyesore to vigilant foundlings. Trying hard to accept the fate of the senators, foundlings walk purposefully on their bone lesions. Why should foundlings feel pain that senators do not? Theater wings promote such parasitic infestation. Fight infestation by shining bone lesions. The arbitrary wings of these former theaters spread outwards into our northern cities bringing with them the worms and amoebas of plague and pestilence.
Furthermore, the inside spiral of the marrow is weakened daily by theater wings. Weak marrow cannot perpetuate truth. A central bone sponge without truth weakens the spirt and pollutes the mind’s taxation. In our cities to the north, spreading theatrical bird motion structures threaten our bone cores. Bone lesions expose the marrow, and the it is made toxic by the scraping of the wings. Spiral fractures abound in wing plagued regions. Fallen bovine dot the horizon, their marrow split in two forcing capitulation and resentment. How can society stand without marrow? Do not allow wings to rob from use our center. Decay must not be abided.
As you can clearly see, theater wings hesitate toward our society’s northern boundaries. Senators dribble parasites into their blood streams to stem the thirst this causes. Scaffolding erupts in infection. Marrow is devoured by unicellular beasts. Angry filibusters trickle inexorably downward, spiraling centerwise. All of these can be avoided if voices raise in unison and sound the clarion hollow. Will your hollow ring in unison? Will your voice lift the heavens and staunch the wings? Or will you let parasites devour the marrow and spiral inward to the core?
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Narrative FeedbackYour score descriptions:
- Ideas And Content: Your score in Ideas And Content means your writing is on its way to being complete and detailed.
- Organization: Indicates the response is clear and logical.
- Voice: Indicates the response is engaging to readers.
- Word Choice: Indicates the word choices are clear.
- Fluency: Indicates that sentences in the response exhibit very good fluency, variety, and style.
- Conventions: Indicates the response is very successful at using conventions correctly.
- Holistic Score: Indicates that, overall, the response is proficient.
- Your response in the “Introduction – Explain the issue in general terms.” section of your essay is strong.
- Your response in the “Body – State your opinion clearly and concisely and support your opinion.” section of your essay is very strong.
- Your response in the “Conclusion” section of your essay is strong. Your essay shows a very strong use of vocabulary.
Your understanding of basic grammar and syntax is well above average.
I was disappointed to find that I raved only above average on a high school level.
